MOC-Productions's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Helping is a Crime(scene)]

Ok...

Well, you took the time to give me somewhat "constructive" criticism so I figured I'd return the favor.

I think I'll start with what was on everyone else's mind when they started to watch this. Preloaders help. That way it doesn't freeze when loading and people can actually FOLLOW the story. Being someone who finds being able to follow the story very important, I'm sure you understand that.

Next thing, your characters are pretty inconsistent. One minute they're just stick figures with heads, the next, they're people with detailed faces next to the screen. When their mouths move, they look like some sort of monkey because their chins don't even move. I didn't know whether he was trying to talk or clear something out of the front of his teeth. The backgrounds look decent at sometimes and rushed at others. If you're going to spend time on the backgrounds, spend time on making the characters in front of them as well.

Also, if you want to make it clear to people how much time it took you to make the first shot, that basically tells them that you took way less time on the other shots, which is obvious when watching.

I'm not going to spend too much time commenting on the music because thats obviously how you envisioned it (at least I hope).

And I feel I must address what you commented on before about my music not being streamed. It actually is. It plays as an event because it's placed inside a movie clip so there wouldn't be any sound delay. That might just be something you don't pay attention to when making your movies (along with a few other things). But hey, it was for school and you just didn't have time.

However, the movie itself had potential. So did the story. But the apparent lack of effort just made me turn it off. You know what that's like. So I give you a 4.

Neon-Crepth responds:

yeah, i think you know the response to each of your comments. i either explained myself in other responses or things are just assumed when you know it was completed in about 2 good days work. and i didn't feel like getting a preloader cause its only like 700 kb. your comp's gotta be slow as shit to freeze up on this. and your movie did keep playing the music after i right clicked and stopped it.
but at least both of our movies have something in common, we both couldn't watch them all the way through... which says something about each flash doesn't it. i thank you for the 4! this really doesn't deserve that. its just for a chuckle.

[Spongebob Sickpants]

Hysterical

"Well I guess Squidward's jacking off" HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

[A Coin Toss]

You know what?

As abstract and odd as this flash was, I couldn't stop watching. It makes a bit more sense when you know and love "No Country For Old Men" which I do. The song was pretty cool too. Nice job.

FrozenSheep responds:

Great Movie.

[Harry The Harlequin Fetus]

Well...

I started to watch this movie, liked what I saw...so much to the point where I stopped it and decided that I'm gonna watch it high later. Thanks for the good material lol. It looks like alot of it is frame by frame drawings, which is very hard to do. Keep up the good hard work.

[TC Round 3: Wacky Races]

Wow

I was going to submit my flash today. Good thing I didn't lol. This is a fantastic movie. The action was great and on top of that, the comedy was funny and very well placed. I thoroughly enjoyed this and could definitely see how much effort you put into it. I look forward to seeing where the story goes from here. Well done.

[Mac Vs Pc Flash]

I didn't mind this

However, I wish it could've gone on for longer. Granted we see ALOT of Mac vs PC type things, you could've gone alot further with it and given us alot more. What you did give us was good though, just more would've been better if done right. Nice job though.

CountLessFilms responds:

yeah we could of writen more but we didnt :O

[DevilSlayer V-1]

Pretty good

The characters and the story were kind of lame, but I'm not gonna hold that against you because I mean this is Newgrounds so it works. I will say that your action scenes were pretty cool looking, even though they were kind of short and needed cooler looking villains to fight off. I still think you did a good job on this though. Last thing though, we don't need a gay joke every five minutes lol. Nonetheless, the voice acting was well done. Overall a pretty decent movie where the hard work is apparent so nice job.

JazLyte responds:

Ok, thanks for taking the time to leave a detailed review. I'll work out the issues next movie.

[A Nightcity Story]

Pretty Impressive

I love noir shorts. This one is great. Love the visuals and the ending. Nice work.

[Mastermind]

Hilarious

Oh my god. That was hysterical. Especially since I had no idea it was a comedy until the tits with legs came on. The dialogue was incredibly funny. Nice job.

[ONE GUN]

Nice

I liked this. Alot of action film homages. Some of it kind of reminded me of the movie Heat. Very nicely done especially since it was your first flash.